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Dragon brume
 Xunk 
 Le 16/11/2006 à 06:46:58 
We have a topic like this since a long time on the french version of the forum... and since maybe some talent can be discovred there too, I volunteer myself to broke the Ice.

I was once a man
But now I'm some drek floating in time
How easy to be lost, how easy to lost pride
When all you can find don't even know what to provide

I cry need, but need what?
Look at my life I can't say that
The problem is : niether resolution or desire
bring something more final than a fire

I tell you the story,
of the man who was never too hot
cause his hearth was cold of misery
a cold that same the sun can't shot

It is neither a tale of light or darkness
just some more words, instead of a vest
instead of an armor to protect, what's in the chest
some word to start, some word to learn, the begining of a silent contest

I was a man, now I am words
Cause being a man just brings me curses
Floating on time,
not even mine
some hours, some day,
that I will have to pay

Memory give to wine
some flavours you can't mind
unless you tasted it
unless you still feel it on your lips

It is a tale of shadow
made from stone, flesh and bones
some will say it is word for hollow
still dream if you can, it will come, it will come

You still a man,
but don't you fear to join the drek on the time?
Can't you see you loose patiently pride
Until you found someone to provide?

(not an happy start I agree, but english is my second language so I'll do what I can ^^)

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Dragon gris
 Reigan 
 Le 02/12/2006 à 17:26:46 
you must always write something , Xunk^^+
Dragon brume
 Xunk 
 Le 05/12/2006 à 00:27:15 
yup, I do... Unfortunatly, or fortunatly... It depends on the fact that you are liking it or not.



Life is a travel
You use to knew where it begins
but sooner or later you're in the dark fog and yell
standing whitout map, lost like any foreigner

Life bring you nowhere
You never know where it finish
So much occasion will be spared
The pepole you loved sooner or later will vanish

Life it is supposed to be at present
But present dosen't even exist
Future become past in only an instant
So you lost yourself, triying to grab it in your fists

Life is evryone's cruisade
a cruisade though, with an unclear goal
and your weapons aren't as simple as buccler and blade
All you really have is your smile and thought

Life; some travel it to the end
Some just visit the backyard of the hostel
I send you this postcard from it's middle eastern
Just to tell you how wonderfull friends I found out of the archipel

I know our roads aren't the same
Anyway copy someone's cruisade is a shame
Just hope someday you'll find a place
where you will find what your desire traced

Mabe for you, life will be enough long
to do what your want, 'till the end of the list
to see what I've seen and much farther
For now I write, still just guess you
I know that road it's only to me it belong
Your own mabe will never exist,
but I'm still sign this as your father¸
Who just put some flags, suppose to brings you threw...

Threw the life
Threw sadness
Threw all I will give
Threw all I will left

Daddy

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Dragon gris
 Reigan 
 Le 05/12/2006 à 20:48:40 
Yes i like it^^
but i'm not so good in poetry :S

ps : you are a real artist!!
Dragon brume
 Xunk 
 Le 06/12/2006 à 01:59:00 
To write poetry
you don't have to be good
Just have to open your eyes on a melody
called life, feeling, or mood

To write poetry
You could put rules
sculpt the words like the tablets of a grossery
what's important is not the line, it's the fuel

Cause write poetry is like made a fire
You need somethings to begins
but once it's started not much more is required
since fire needs just: hot, air and a few things

What you will need is: Pen, paper and feeling
those ones could be found or easily aquired
Poetry didn't meant to be learn
Evry children have it's own in his hearth

Never forget it
or you will be more blind than blind
Never shut it down, or put it in a crypt
cause it will be like crashing your own mind

You said before you're not so good
did you forget? Still you have mood
I take the following compliment and thanks you
Kind of a gift, I deliver all I knew

Evrybody makes poetry
some in the words, some in the sounds
I'm sure you'll can too if you want, really
and what a good surprise to see the listener hearth bound



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Dragon gris
 Reigan 
 Le 17/12/2006 à 19:51:34 
It's written "international"
so , i'll make one in Italian^^




Una stella brilla nel cielo...
Perchè penso a te ?
Forse mi sono sbagliato...
Di persona , di ricordo...

Una luna d'argente...
Che non brilla per me...
Il pensiero non c'è...
In questa notte...

E questa stella nel cielo...
Un'amore con te...
Ma tu non ci sei...
Come dirti "Ti Amo" ?

Sono andoto fuori ,
Come tutti giorni ,
Per vedere sè ci sei...
Ma come sempre ,
Il mio amore non c'è...

Coricato da solo ,
Guardando le stelle ,
Io desiderei
Cambiare di mondo...

E aspetto ancora
Di trovartmi alla porta...
La speranzà di vederti , sentirti , baciarti...
E una fantasia...

Ce message a gagné 10 Po !
Dragon brume
 Xunk 
 Le 17/12/2006 à 03:43:55 
Pretty good ^^
(I had to use my bad translator to understand but I liked it same before I knew what it means... )


Everything is nothing
and nothing is everything
Some will says it don't have senses
Some will says it sounds like fences
But then they just don't know how it hurt
When you finally understood it in the hearth

Some live in thier mind
They claculate, operate, and finally find
Some live by thier feeling
Knowing evrything but always searching
Some try to live in thier flesh
but thoses just react, imitating, held thier souls in a hush

The fact is we all had learn
that world make us, cause it's real
But if you try to confirm
You'll see how false it could feel
The fact is we all define world
cause without us, it don't matters

So many are searching
ingnoring that there is nothing
nothing to find, nothing to held
and less to love, or keep for self
So many will stil searching
same if we say it, pepole of body never listening

We all are just beatiful talker
Us who know, really know
Sometime I'd like to imagine how it will be if we acted
Mabe it's just that truth is an act Killer
In fornt of the thruth, we never know how
How it will be if the world could be changed

We can't change the world, just change ourselves
just our own mind, just our own cells
and when we die, we are forgotten
cause without us die the truth we loved
and when we die, it's not just us that end
cause without mind, body isn't there
Dragon bleu
 [?] Baffuz 
 Le 18/12/2006 à 14:46:30 
Andichael: dolcissima con una ragazza ci fai 1 figurone, solo 1 paio di errorini ma vabbe...

Xunk: i like your style, my favourite is the third :d

Dragon gris
 Reigan 
 Le 18/12/2006 à 15:52:10 
Baffuz ==> se vuoi , puoi ritrascrirlo senza i errorini??^^
Dragon bleu
 [?] Baffuz 
 Le 18/12/2006 à 18:03:42 
ok intanto è trascrirlo senza gli errorini  ;)

Una stella brilla nel cielo...
Perchè penso a te ?
Forse mi sono sbagliato...
Di persona , di ricordo...

Una luna d'argento...
Chè non brilla per me... (sta per "che" o "perchè"?)
Il pensiero non c'è...
In questa notte...

E questa stella nel cielo...
Un'amore con te...
Ma tu non ci sei...
Come dirti "Ti Amo" ?

Sono andato fuori ,
Come tutti giorni ,
Per vedere se ci sei...
Ma come sempre ,
Il mio amore non c'è...

Coricato da solo ,
Guardando le stelle ,
Io desiderei
Cambiare mondo...

E aspetto ancora
Di trovarti alla porta...
La speranza di vederti , sentirti , baciarti...
E una fantasia...

Ce message a gagné 10 Po !
Dragon gris
 Reigan 
 Le 19/12/2006 à 19:50:41 
grazie^^
Dragon bleu
 [?] Baffuz 
 Le 24/12/2006 à 21:36:50 
Non è propio una poesia ma è un rap che ho scritto ispirandomi a Ev e che sta avendo un certo successo tra i miei amici (è un po sporco ma non fateci troppo caso, qua il rap è tutto cosi).
Lo metto perche non sono bravo a scrivere poesie ma qualche rima la so fare.

It's not a poem but is a rap that i wrote thinking to Ev and euh... i can't translate the other sentences, just don't pay attention to some words  ;)

un cavaliere un po' sfigato
l'altra sera mi ha sfidato
in una battaglia col dragone
mentre faceva l'ubriacone
io e lui giù a rappare
a chi più fiato sa dare
e i due draghi Vesa e Monoko
a darsi battaglia con il fuoco
io che sono imbestialito
lancio il primo invito:
- monoko, che nome del cazzo
il mio drago gli farà un mazzo
più grosso di un grattacielo
con una montagna di pelo
e quello svitato ribatte:
-le tipe con me sono matte
come godono è arrapante
per questo sono il venditore ambulante!
questo qui è propio malato
una sorpresa gli ho preparato
per chiudere l'incontro
senza subire un affronto
- tu ti fai chiamare venditore ambulante
conosci tante fighe e te ne scopi tante
ma i tuoi amici ti chiamano samurai
che stai con le peggiofighe ma non te le scopi mai! ah ah ah
ma se qui la sfida è già finita
nei cieli è tutta un'altra vita
il mio drago sta perdendo di brutto
perchè l'altro se lo fa su tutto
quindi urlo al mio dragone
fammi arrosto sto coglione
cuocilo a puntino
che lo metto su uno spiedino
quindi prendo un palo
e glielo ficco su per il culo
vesa lo cuoce alla fiamma
e ce lo mangiamo dalla mamma


Non è calmo come le vostre poesie però....

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Dragon gris
 Reigan 
 Le 29/12/2006 à 20:28:00 
^^

magari non capiscono;-)!
Dragon bleu
 [?] Baffuz 
 Le 29/12/2006 à 21:45:13 
Mooolto probabile :)
Dragon noir
 Le 16/01/2007 à 09:00:26 
kool those poems are sweeeeet!!

im no good in poetry!!!!lol!

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